Break off

Posted by Zave | Posted in , , , , , | Posted on 02:18


B- Begging for your mercy
R- Regretting my last steps
E- Escaping my little world
A- Abandoned here I am
K- Kneeling before you love

O- Offer me some courage
F- Fill me with hope
F- For my fateful death

P.S. - For Acrostic Only

Comments (14)

Interesting take on the prompt .. love the photo.

Beautifully written.
Why break away from life for an unworthy heart?
Maybe there is somebody else whom you deserve and who deserves you more than anybody else.

Love the photo
and of course the writing.

Yaay! GLAD TO SEE YOU AT ACRO ONLY TOO :D
:)
loved the photo it was beautiful, liked your take on the prompt!

Hey,
that was quite good. If i am not mistaken its your 1st attempt for A.O ?
I myself tried to write such once, but no success.

Amias,
Thanks for the visit.

Shas,
Not that I'm entirely hopeless, but its just a metaphor.
Life seems to end when you break off, right?

Dimitri,
Thank you mam.

Sonshu,
I should thank you for that.
Your Acro poem inspired me to try it out actually.

Anurag,
Yes, it was my first attempt at A.O.
And I must say, its quite tough to get through.
Took a bit of time to frame that.

ummmmmmmm..............
nice picture..!!!

Dhupa,
This has become your standard comment for my posts I guess.
:P

nice pic...n nice way...:)

I appreciate your appreciation Smita.
:)

@zave . . .
actually i am nt really in fr acostics . . . dnt like them much . . .bt seriously the pictures are awesum!

Okay. Got it!

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